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Whats so wrong with love? FINISHED :).

Whats so wrong with love? FINISHED :).

20.8K Reads 222 Votes 18 Part Story
Colette By ColetteRedTape Completed

Whats so wrong with love? Through out this Romance story Erin and Jackson will find out what actually is wrong with love. 
As Erin and Jackson find each other, Erin struggles with herself, she has kept detached and emotionless since her dad left but the Jackson comes into town and that all changes, she finds herself smiling again, laughing and enjoying life. 
Jackson has a secret though and when Erin uncovers it she has a choice to make between her brother, who is her best friend, and her new boyfriend Jackson. Can she make the right choice? In the end will this Choice be the right one? Or will it eventually distroy her and her family?

Hartbreak Hartbreak May 28, 2010
Great start! you might want to change fag to cigarette though. other then that its great!
ColetteRedTape ColetteRedTape Apr 20, 2010
@Kyolovescookies :
                              Oh because like if he didn't turn her CD player off then someone else did LOL. I didn't really to back to that part did I LOL.
                              And Yeah I wrote it like two years ago and forgot to check it before I posted it LOL. 
                              Thankyouu so muchhh, 
                              xx :) 
Nightlylioness Nightlylioness Apr 18, 2010
Im not sure but it seems like I read this before. Not in a bad way though it's like I already read it. But good chapter anyways. Voting...
ColetteRedTape ColetteRedTape Jan 06, 2010
@dreamybanana: S'okay. I was like that at first. :D. Hope you found the rest okay. Thankyou for reading though. Support is awesome. :D
dreamybanana dreamybanana Jan 06, 2010
@ColetteRedTape: Ah, oops. I'm new to this site(well, I signed up but was to intimidated to post anything I guess). I'm still getting my feet thx.
ColetteRedTape ColetteRedTape Jan 06, 2010
@dreamybanana: Dreamybaanana, there is, it's in 10 parts, so there is like 9 more chapters, each one is longer :D.