The Kidnapping.

The Kidnapping.

185K Reads 3.4K Votes 16 Part Story
awilson136 By awilson136 Updated Aug 08, 2017

Once upon a time in a magical kingdom.... HA. Who am I kidding? This isn't going to be one of those happy stories where everything goes good. There's going to be mistakes made, and lessons learned. So, sit down and get ready to read about Sophia's crazy life.

AshKB0819 AshKB0819 Mar 25
The sentence, in my opinion, should go "I planned" or I plan on walking to my friend Ashley's house after they "left" or "leave" depending on which time tense ur using.
AshKB0819 AshKB0819 Mar 25
"but it was still light enough to tell that someone was staring through the window".
littlebabydoll12 littlebabydoll12 Jun 20, 2016
When u say they not go be back in to Tuesday what was the day they saw the man
hannahlayne42 hannahlayne42 Feb 07, 2016
Go check out my story Please! I have 9 chapters so far and need inspiration! If you have ideas or names you want me to use I will for sure use them! Star all chapters and I will read your books and star all as well!
devil-1- devil-1- Jan 18, 2017
You should make the chapters longer . Coz like , imagine it printed on paper it would barely be a page .
trixareforteens trixareforteens Mar 06, 2016
Ha… if be thinking "let's get the flippity flop outta here cuz that isn't normal, k. I'm gonna go call a police guy now…"