The Virgin Stripper (Completed)

The Virgin Stripper (Completed)

144K Reads 3.1K Votes 20 Part Story
aauggiee By aauggiee Updated Nov 10, 2013

I was nice I was sweet I was cute. The cute part never changed but for everything else . Ehh. It all changed 5 years ago when my mom was killed by her boyfriend and I was almost kidnapped by him. Luckily I was able to escape. The day I escapes was a new beginning for my new life. A life that I don't ever want to change. The life of a Virgin Stripper.

aye_wut_dat_mouth_do aye_wut_dat_mouth_do Jul 30, 2014
Hol' up. A 14 year old girl, with two boyfriends, who's a stripper, with a muh'fvcking car! I just can't deal
aauggiee aauggiee Mar 19, 2013
@Breathless_Love  Im very Thankful for your tip I'll make sure to take it into consideration. I'm glad you enjoyed it tho.
bianksterrr_ bianksterrr_ Mar 19, 2013
I loved it. It was descriptive and I could see it all in my head. But maybe adding more spaces and indenting and all will help the reader read easier. Just a tip. But otherwise, I loved it. <3