War of the Sexes

33 Part Story 1.9M Reads 21.5K Votes
Zoey Johnson(: By Kissmyoops3 Completed
When Ellie and her friends pull a prank that goes horribly wrong, Ellie finds herself in a position to which no one had imagined. She had been frozen in time for nearly 500 years, finally thawed it in a world of split sexes. Desperate for any way back to her old world, she meets two boys who agree to take her to the "Nerd" as he's known on the Boy's World. Hatred and chemistry start to tango as the journey begins to see if Ellie can ever return home.
I love how u just got start to the point.. So far so good!!! ( there a chance u might not c this comment but if u do please do a little criticism on my only book Zana on my page) by the way I totally voted this chapter
Ok I just have to say you are such a talented writer I would have never came up with some of the things u did like when you said "the dam broke and I let my tears out" that was an amazing analogy and I wanted to say ur plot is amazing!!! Luv ya
Warning! This is a nice novel but the ending will make you dislike it! Just saying
thats pretty cool. XD i would probably be one of the people making those pods though.
I really like this book, but there's a few grammar mistakes.,
The whole starting a new paragraph in the middle of a sentence bugs me, but your writing is fabulous!