War of the Sexes

War of the Sexes

33 Part Story 2.1M Reads 25.5K Votes
Zoey Johnson(: By Kissmyoops3 Completed

When Ellie and her friends pull a prank that goes horribly wrong, Ellie finds herself in a position to which no one had imagined. She had been frozen in time for nearly 500 years, finally thawed it in a world of split sexes. Desperate for any way back to her old world, she meets two boys who agree to take her to the "Nerd" as he's known on the Boy's World. Hatred and chemistry start to tango as the journey begins to see if Ellie can ever return home.

ed2wfu ed2wfu Nov 21, 2015 08:26AM
Superlative writing skills. Crazy good! Loving it :) Incredible work.
RigsterMup RigsterMup Nov 13, 2015 01:17AM
WHERE IS THE SEX??? I WANT IT NOW! IS THERE A BOOK STARTING WITH A BANG?
RachelSonia333 RachelSonia333 Oct 26, 2015 05:57PM
i love the dialogue, it makes it all very real. you don't much get into the time-freezing - yet, which is important too. and will you please please let me proofread for grammar? the errors bother me so much. otherwise, great start!
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Omqmadds Omqmadds Oct 07, 2015 06:52AM
This seems like a sincerely genuine plot and despite a few hints of cliches, I'm allured by the first chapter.
Levelskid Levelskid Oct 05, 2015 02:57AM
Well, I like to say I love the premise, and I like how Ellie and Jim kiss, that was beautifully described, especially after she nursed a two year crush on him, but I kind of felt it was a little to cliche, but it was still good. I look forward to reading more.