Taken

Taken

12K Reads 301 Votes 22 Part Story
Caroline By lafleurdeverite Updated Jan 04, 2013

It's not every day you discover that you're not who you thought you were. And it certainly isn't an everyday occurrence to be whisked away into a spaceship hurtling towards your home planet, just so you can stop it's largest war in history. But as for Aimée Mackerson? That's just what happened.

MusicMonsterBVB MusicMonsterBVB Mar 10, 2013
Wow when I saw the cover I knew I just had to read it:) this seems like a great story:)
Just_Being_Casual_ Just_Being_Casual_ Oct 01, 2012
First of all, the cover immediantly drew me into reading it, its amazingly written and you truly have a talent :)
moonchic moonchic Jul 04, 2012
Nice! This made me laugh and I don't normally laugh when I read people's stuff but this got me! Especially the part about Chuck Norris, Batman, and Godzilla. I guessing you got Ultimate showdown from the song? Anyway, this is great! Short, but to the point. I, for one, liked it.
peaches_and_cream peaches_and_cream Jul 01, 2012
The chopped sentences in the beginning definitely caught my attention. Reminds me of spanish class. I hated conjugating xD
                              
                              Anyway, I like your story so far. I think it has potential :)
mystifique mystifique Jun 29, 2012
haha i would have said the same of you for french ;) i think im gonna read more for this, cause the last sentence sounds really intersting!!
coolstoryjacksparrow coolstoryjacksparrow Jun 28, 2012
Wow. 6 months ago? Interesting ;D
                              
                              Anyways, all I say is try to add more details and space paragraphs away from each other a little bit. Other than that, this seems it's going to be a really good novel. I like the ending line. I'm reading on!
                              
                              -Cade x3