Freedom from Innocence

Freedom from Innocence

83.3K Reads 2.9K Votes 17 Part Story
Sheri Scarsella By MrsScarsella Completed

Previously written for Harlequin Romance's So You Think You Can Write 2015 contest, this book has transformed in very positive ways, enlightening readers with a different experience of sexuality and trust.  Please enjoy.

Everything about Jake Hawk screams money and experience, even his shoes.   When Jake wants something, he gets it, without hesitation.  Now he wants to settle down with the right girl.  Someone who isn't as experienced as he.  

Caroline Sorensen's past relationships left her with a bad taste for men so when brash and straight-forward Jake Hawk enters her classroom, she's hesitantly attracted.  Living in the past, Caroline won't easily give into Jake's charms. 

Can Jake coax her to come out with him and learn a whole new world or will Caroline give into her hesitation and hide in her past.

EliesaL EliesaL Feb 28
In my daughter's words: I'm her (Caroline).
                              I love the way you describe your characters. They are so real and I think everyone can somehow find themselves in your story. I'll definately be reading this book. Thanks for sharing your story!!!
I love the name Caroline. When my hubby and I had our second child we considered Caroline if it was a girl. It wasn't but still love the name. Thanks for reading my story.
aggie23FF aggie23FF Jan 29
This was wat too good ! I loved Caroline's character. She seems real, and interesting. I love commited characters ans she realle seems to be one.
                              What I'd have liked to read here are more descriptions, regarding settings basically. So we can understand a bit where are they. 
                              Perfect perfect.
HolyMane HolyMane Oct 26, 2015
I was hooked from the very first line. I like how your chapters are built. Dialogues are everything. I like Jake, he's my guy for sure. I have nothing to say about your grammar or your writing style. This chapter flows really smoothly and it was easy to read so it's all good! :)
using_my_wings using_my_wings Oct 23, 2015
Wow Jake seems cocky- but I like him! This is a great book! I enjoyed this chapter! I'm curious to see where it will be going. Keep up the great work! ❤️
BCWrites BCWrites Sep 13, 2015
I like the second better, but still a little confused as to why she's attracted if she want to avoid dangerous men.