Death, Danger, Desire (ON HOLD) [EDITING!]

5 Part Story 3.6K Reads 86 Votes
Krishee Patel By KPatel20 Updated 4 years ago
Kale Embers is one of the best agents in the CIA. He's just successfully completed his last assignment and is looking to relax for a while. 
    
    However, the CIA have different plans. They want Kale to go deep undercover as a criminal in the world's most brutal prison - Terminal Island. But this is no ordinary prison, this prison hosts the new internet craze called the "Death Challenge" where the inmates are forced to take part in a series of games in order to seek freedom.
    
    Join Kale as he tackles his most challenging misson ever on Terminal Island - the home of death, danger and desire...
    
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    Inspired by the "Death Race" and "Fast and Furious" films.
God, you are so good at writing! I am in love with this story! You're really good at writing action scenes (the first chapter) and this story sounds like it's going to be really different and surprising. I cannot wait to see what's gonna happen. I like how the chapter titles are quotes as well - I may have to steal that idea for the future ;) And I love the cover - damn, he's hot! :) Add more soon!
                                    Miracle xx
God, you are so good at writing! I am in love with this story! You're really good at writing action scenes (the first chapter) and this story sounds like it's going to be really different and surprising. I cannot wait to see what's gonna happen. I like how the chapter titles are quotes as well - I may have to steal that idea for the future ;) And I love the cover - damn, he's hot! :) Add more soon!
                                    Miracle xx
God, you are so good at writing! I am in love with this story! You're really good at writing action scenes (the first chapter) and this story sounds like it's going to be really different and surprising. I cannot wait to see what's gonna happen. I like how the chapter titles are quotes as well - I may have to steal that idea for the future ;) And I love the cover - damn, he's hot! :) Add more soon!
                                    Miracle xx
God, you are so good at writing! I am in love with this story! You're really good at writing action scenes (the first chapter) and this story sounds like it's going to be really different and surprising. I cannot wait to see what's gonna happen. I like how the chapter titles are quotes as well - I may have to steal that idea for the future ;) And I love the cover - damn, he's hot! :) Add more soon!
                                    Miracle xx
God, you are so good at writing! I am in love with this story! You're really good at writing action scenes (the first chapter) and this story sounds like it's going to be really different and surprising. I cannot wait to see what's gonna happen. I like how the chapter titles are quotes as well - I may have to steal that idea for the future ;) And I love the cover - damn, he's hot! :) Add more soon!
                                    Miracle xx
God, you are so good at writing! I am in love with this story! You're really good at writing action scenes (the first chapter) and this story sounds like it's going to be really different and surprising. I cannot wait to see what's gonna happen. I like how the chapter titles are quotes as well - I may have to steal that idea for the future ;) And I love the cover - damn, he's hot! :) Add more soon!
                                    Miracle xx