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Oiza [ O-e-zah ] By yovngmami Completed

"At least you could've chosen a better girl..I mean she's so..dark"

WARNING: at the beginning of this story, you'll see phrases like " chocolate skin" "are you into chocolate?" and such. I know this is not cute when you're referring to black people (we're always compared with food, ugh) but I wanted it to be that way so you can notice the evolution of the characters. Justin will stop using these words and Madison, the main character, as well. You'll see. 

DISCLAIMER: this was my very first fanfiction and it's kinda crappy because I didn't know anything about writing. In certain parts it might not even make sense, read at your own risk LOL


2016, All Rights Reserved.
I'm Oiza Q. Obasuyi aka 'yovngmami' and I'm the author of this fanfiction.
Please do not steal, it took a lot of work to write this, message me first if you want to translate it in your mother tongue and give me credits.

*clears throat* *sings* fuuuuuuck ooooooffffff. Bish I'm not even black but that isn't OK ever to say about anybody.
kingforpresident kingforpresident 6 days ago
So what you saying is to stop dating black guys and move onto white people  and Hispanics and Asians everyone but black that's a double standard right there
iam_Addi iam_Addi Jul 12
God punish you and ur family u never be happy in ur life AHEM! All the darkness in the world will come and hunt you for the rest of ur life and u will never fine love AHEM!!
iam_Addi iam_Addi Jul 12
I bet they have seen a black girl in there life🤣cuz he wouldn't have said that.
Exactly like nigga you are black..It doesn't even make sense😔
Lol my ass is too small for society, but too big for ballet. Dammit why can't it be smaller!