Jo Goes To Paris

20 Part Story 353K Reads 8.4K Votes
Sissa By SissaRomanova Completed
Dumped by her boyfriend, unemployed, middle-aged and chocolate addict. That is Johanna's current situation. To turn the situation around, she decided to go to Paris with her best friend, a dream she had always had. Little did she know that the beautiful city held many surprises for her...
    
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I love the cover and great title. I like the description it sounds good! :-)
I'm really loving it so far! The only improvement I could give is that sometimes your misuse your grammar. For example, it is incorrect to put ?!. You either have to put ! Or ? On their own. Can't wait for the next chapter!
I really enjoyed it, hope u can make more books like this........ Brilliant even tho i just read the 1st chapter...... LOL but really its nice
its my dream to go to Paris as well. I hope to go before the year is over. loving the book thus far.
They made a mistake instead of she put the ice cream they wrote she put she ice cream 
Je m'appele greg et my ex girlfriend joanna, ini hanya super hebat