The Broken Girl

The Broken Girl

119K Reads 4.8K Votes 51 Part Story
:|Jules|: By CharlieSmiler143 Completed

She's broken.

People broke the girl who was once happy, the only time when she can smile is when she's alone. 

Being alone is her favourite thing in the world. She gets bullied at school, she gets abused at home, she has no-one to turn to ever since her best friend left her to fend for herself. But when a new boy comes Into school he tries to get comfortable with her and teaches her a couple of things. One of them? He teaches her a word called; 

Happiness

valeriem205 valeriem205 May 02
LJ is my friend's name. are you a guy and do you go to Carmel Middle School in the 7th grade?
xAdorably_Awkwardx xAdorably_Awkwardx Feb 29, 2016
There's no fall stops throughout every paragraph, sorry I'm just saying.
10_xoxo_01 10_xoxo_01 Apr 07, 2016
This is good but you should put more punctuation throughout the paragraph
Bi_baby_loves_you Bi_baby_loves_you Aug 14, 2016
There's this really great type of punctuation.
                              
                              It's called a full stop. You should use it sometime.
                              
                              I can't read this book I'm sorry but it's just one never ending sentence.
Disney_animelover123 Disney_animelover123 Dec 01, 2016
Is Charlie a boy or girl? I can't really tell but I think it's a boy🤔
DrunkLuve_ DrunkLuve_ Jul 26, 2016
This is good but work on your punctuation in the story so it can be more understandable.