Tris Pedrad || #wattys 2016

Tris Pedrad || #wattys 2016

28K Reads 683 Votes 22 Part Story
QueenBlue_C✨ By blueberrypansycake Updated Nov 27

Fourtris 
Idiot brothers 
What if Tris was Uriah's twin? Zeke was their older brother?
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ju-jubean ju-jubean Jul 29
You relies that when Uriah says, ' I ain't no pansycake' he's technically calling himself a pansycake.
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I like the word pansycake but I feel it's a bit overused in this book
BeanieWriter BeanieWriter Dec 09, 2015
Small grammatical errors, and just spacing it out is all that I would recommend. I love how Tris is so playful with Four #Four❤️Tris
BeanieWriter BeanieWriter Dec 09, 2015
Try to bolden the 'Time lapse' and give a couple down bars in between.