Tris Pedrad ||

Tris Pedrad ||

36.9K Reads 907 Votes 20 Part Story
QueenBlue_C✨ By blueberrypansycake Updated Aug 22, 2016

Fourtris 
Idiot brothers 
What if Tris was Uriah's twin? Zeke was their older brother?
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RestoreMe RestoreMe May 17
Oh really? Watchu doing with him? Some addition and multiplication? Wink wonk.
ju-jubean ju-jubean Jul 29, 2016
You relies that when Uriah says, ' I ain't no pansycake' he's technically calling himself a pansycake.
Obbsessive-Oraganism Obbsessive-Oraganism Aug 20, 2016
SORRY THE FIRST LETTER OF THE LPHEBET WONT WORK THTS WHY MY LST COMMENTS SYS tht
District4_DAUNTLESS District4_DAUNTLESS Jun 15, 2016
I like the word pansycake but I feel it's a bit overused in this book
undressedbabe undressedbabe Dec 09, 2015
Small grammatical errors, and just spacing it out is all that I would recommend. I love how Tris is so playful with Four #Four❤️Tris
undressedbabe undressedbabe Dec 09, 2015
Try to bolden the 'Time lapse' and give a couple down bars in between.