What if Tris was Uriah's twin? Zeke was their older brother?
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You relies that when Uriah says, ' I ain't no pansycake' he's technically calling himself a pansycake.
SORRY THE FIRST LETTER OF THE LPHEBET WONT WORK THTS WHY MY LST COMMENTS SYS tht
I like the word pansycake but I feel it's a bit overused in this book
Small grammatical errors, and just spacing it out is all that I would recommend. I love how Tris is so playful with Four #Four❤️Tris
Try to bolden the 'Time lapse' and give a couple down bars in between.