Their Eyes

Their Eyes

181 Reads 9 Votes 4 Part Story
Emmalise By Demonic666 Updated Sep 20, 2010

In an unknown time, a small child has been saved from an ugly fate with a terrible power misusing tribe known as The Ones. She was brought to The Resistance, who have been slowly developing their strengths in the mountains to train a special child like her, to protect all that they can against The Ones, and to regain the land from their power. By stealing one of Their chidren away one woman had caused fury among The Ones, their rage increasing over the years the child grew and was kept from her arranged future....

KAFrak KAFrak Sep 17, 2010
Atleast you a creative plot and can actually write. Glad the first chapter is interesting, so many stories on here have fist chapter when nothing happens at all
                              
                              
                              
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EyExplod EyExplod Sep 17, 2010
Quite intriguing for a first chapter...seeing as how most of them end up boring me :P
                              But this is well written. And i can't help but wonder what that dream is all about. Nice work :)
Demonic666 Demonic666 Sep 17, 2010
@DemonKin123 lilly u retard you posted that 3 times -_- yesh i will read lol but tomorrow cos i am tired =P CMON VOTE IT!!! 
DemonKin123 DemonKin123 Sep 17, 2010
Hi I didn't write this but you should really read it ( I'll chop off ur head with an axe if you don't )( just kidding)
                              it's called  Stay: a story of finding love without being able to see it.
DemonKin123 DemonKin123 Sep 17, 2010
Hi I didn't write this but you should really read it ( I'll chop off ur head with an axe if you don't )( just kidding)
                              it's called  Stay: a story of finding love without being able to see it.
DemonKin123 DemonKin123 Sep 17, 2010
Hi I didn't write this but you should really read it ( I'll chop off ur head with an axe if you don't )( just kidding)
                              it's called  Stay: a story of finding love without being able to see it.