Through It All

Through It All

118K Reads 5.5K Votes 38 Part Story
Madai Romero By madairifa Completed

In the small town of Lakewood  in the nineteenth century, the future of Adam Lancaster and Sophia Willis has been set through an arrange marriage, but Sophia is in love with the son of the richest man in town and Adam has never considered marriage as part of his life. Will they give each other a chance or are they destined to live unhappily ever after?

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Whylea Whylea Feb 02
Ugh. That Daniel guy is already on my list of hated characters. I really interested in this story and I love the tone of it, very sophisticated and formal.
You consistently change the tense you are writing in. This is a grammatical mistake that takes away the meaning of the story.
The guy you cast as Adam is twice his age in real life...maybe a new actor or make Adam older...?
I can't help but fall in love with this book even though I've been hurt many times. By other books.
MorrighansMuse MorrighansMuse Aug 21, 2015
I just took a peek at your cast and it's Richard Armitage as Adam!!! The birthday boy (as of this writing, that is :))
MorrighansMuse MorrighansMuse Aug 21, 2015
Oy vey, something's not going well with Daniel.  Love your depiction of the world she's in, the urgency of her wanting something serious and proper out of her meetings with Daniel.
                              
                              Btw, there's a word missing in the paragraph where she pulls her cape so the heat doesn't escape.