My King

My King

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merry giggles pen cheshire By mongolgirl Completed

"Before our marriage," the king vowed, a malicious smile playing around his mouth, "you will submit to me. You will call me your king." 

Eada, the empress of Tria, was promised to the king of Vasda as the only way to keep peace between their two countries. As consequence, she must travel out of her own country and into the vast desert of Vasda where the perilous court of King Spyre awaits. Due to the king's infamous temper, she knows she must tread carefully.

However, since this marriage would never have been her choice, Eada has no interest in the king. He is determined to change that. As time passes, she realizes the gods are against her when things begin to unravel, and she discovers that she's not the only one in danger.

Sa4lyf Sa4lyf Oct 11
Ooooh, just started reading this and it is very well written!! I am intrigued to read further
Vintaginity Vintaginity May 23, 2013
I really love the descriptions you have near the beginning it's amazing and I really love your style of details and it all flows well. Sorry that was such a sucky compliment but I"m dumbfounded by how pretty your words are.
                              
                              Gah I just love it.
                              
                              Vintaginty ♥
                              
                              Good Luck In The competition.
BookFlower BookFlower May 04, 2013
Very interesting start! Your beginning really dragged me into your story. It was mysterious, exciting and a bit nerve wrecking. You did an excellent job at controlling your storyline! Nice job!!
darkness2light darkness2light May 03, 2013
Great prologue. I like the names of the characters, it sounds a lot like the names court people have.
                              
                              The description of the story is very catchy and arranged marriage stories are an all time favorite with many XD
IncoherentDrivel IncoherentDrivel May 03, 2013
The summary was intresting and so is the concept, While the concept of arranged marriage to bring peace isnt the most original, you do manage to put your own twis to it, and i truly like how you lack of any cliche despite the concept being used before, it seems intresting so far.
mongolgirl mongolgirl May 01, 2013
@lacoco Thank you. I hope your questions are answered in the next chapter(s) :)