Getting Caught In The Rain

Getting Caught In The Rain

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Pumpkin7190 By Pumpkin7190 Updated Jul 07, 2011

Jane is a junior in high school. Things were going okay until she met Ricky, the school bad boy. They fall in love and are at the climax of their relationship when Ricky is forced to go to military school. Once he leaves, everyone wants a piece of Jane, and she begins to realize she needs someone for protection since Ricky isn't there. Then she meets Heath, a smart and geeky yet handsome junior. He protects her and Jane is as happy as can be, but after 5 months, Ricky comes back and he doesn't like Heath. What will happen all lies within 
Jane's hands. What would you do? Who would choose?

KAFrak KAFrak Sep 17, 2010
Holy crap, a good start. It's mysterious, bloody, and give us a reason to read and find out what happens next. This is how stories are suppose to start, with something crazy
                              
                              
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