Four friends keep two girls hostage in a huge house. They have blocked all doors and all the ways out of the house. But one of the girls makes an odd connection with the cheif of the police when she calls 911....
cover by: Verde56
seriously im was just done writing a chapter from my story and i litteraly wrote one of my characters name Jay before i read this chapter
Really who says 'sorry gotta keep you hostage now' (not hate love the book and i just thought it was funny)
Goddammit jimmy, didn't I tell you to check the car first ?!?!
Hold on, why would a kidnapper tell them his name? I'm sorry but this story is a bit.. Under developed and cliche, try reading stories about kidnappers and being kidnapped before you write a story about it. This is just some helpful advice for later chapters.
Really good so far, please make another chapter . I'm dyeing to see what will happen next!