A Hostage To Remember

A Hostage To Remember

24.6K Reads 914 Votes 8 Part Story
Caitlin Stump By CatSmilesForBandits_ Updated Jul 29

Four friends keep two girls hostage in a huge house. They have blocked all doors and all the ways out of the house. But one of the girls makes an odd connection with the cheif of the police when she calls 911....

cover by: Verde56

Rishen251 Rishen251 May 31
seriously im was just done writing a chapter from my story and i litteraly wrote one of my characters name Jay before i read this chapter
- - Feb 10
Really who says 'sorry gotta keep you hostage now' (not hate love the book and i just thought it was funny)
xox_ninja xox_ninja Sep 17
Goddammit jimmy, didn't I tell you to check the car first ?!?!
Hold on, why would a kidnapper tell them his name? I'm sorry but this story is a bit.. Under developed and cliche, try reading stories about kidnappers and being kidnapped before you write a story about it. This is just some helpful advice for later chapters.
alfaWolf2001 alfaWolf2001 Jul 21, 2015
Really good so far, please make another chapter . I'm dyeing to see what will happen next!