Losing Cinderella (Wattys2016)

Losing Cinderella (Wattys2016)

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ThoughtsOnPaper By ThoughtsOnPaper Updated May 26, 2015

Ashtyn Montgomery has been hailed a celebrity in her world. Blessed with a sensational voice and a body that can grace the dance floor, she had a very bright future as a performer. But, she wanted to leave that world to pursue a different career path. In order to do that, she hid her voice to work in one of the most prestigious event management companies in Perth, Hart Enterprises. Things get rather exciting, and uncomfortable, when she crosses paths with Rhys McLaughlin, the heir to the company. In an ideal scenario, this chance meeting would have been perfect for Ashtyn. Only problem was: Rhys does not want her in his world.

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I love Fridays. Especially for some reason when it rains on that day
I liked this chapter, but it could've been easier to read if you shortened the paragraphs. Short paragraphs are easier and quicker to read. Hope this helps! Apart from that, everything is perfect. Best of luck for all your future works :)
😂😂 love the fact i live in perth western Australia now. Very much
cockyhead cockyhead Jun 16
I read all the chapters and forgot to vote because i was so mesmerized by this book. 
                              
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alioha368 alioha368 Jul 20
I like the story so far but that was a word time skip transition. Just thought I might point that out. Not trying to be rude or anything
I kinda dozed off and didn't even finish the chapter...maybe you can make it more interesting?