Whatever We Want

Whatever We Want

324 Reads 14 Votes 2 Part Story
Elena By CoCoLoVe Updated Sep 19, 2010

The guy Elena is crushing on has a secret. No, this is not a vampire story. Its a story of a powerful gift and who's going to kill her crush to get it. He isn't afraid to go after Elena when Jace isn't willing to go after her, afraid of his secret. Elena knows she's ment to be with Jace, but his ememy may be her only choice. Second love. First is the worst second is the best, right? Elena dissagrees...

Gohardorgohome Gohardorgohome Dec 05, 2010
I liked that a lot:) it really granbs your attention, especially since you made it easy for us to relate to the main character. I liked the ending:)
SillyHead SillyHead Sep 19, 2010
I think its good so far but I agree with her about grammar mistakes . Just watch out for those.  That and a few missing letters and stuff .
                              Other than that, good story (: