How long does it take a heart to heal? When the damage feels beyond repair, how do you face the days that dawn before you?
Your words are laced very intricately. You put a lot of effort to enable the reader to understand the emotions the character expresses. Well done.
this describes heartbreak all too well. i hope she'll feel better soon!
Aw... now i really want to know what happens. I love how you captured her anger and sadness/ frustration.
I love the description, and Iove short stories, so I'm definatley reading on :D x
@Brokenlessthan3 OMGah just got this! Thank you so much!!! ^___^
JUst by reading the blurb..."man," I thought.."This story is gonna leave me breathless....'
I love the way you describe everything and the big effect it leaves on its readers...keep going :))