Everything We Had [COMPLETE]

Everything We Had [COMPLETE]

44.5K Reads 1.4K Votes 11 Part Story
Mayen By MayenWrites Completed

How long does it take a heart to heal? When the damage feels beyond repair, how do you face the days that dawn before you?

  • bestfriend
  • boyfriend
  • breakup
  • cheating
  • family
  • heartbreak
  • heartbroken
  • highschool
  • love
  • relationship
selenalatina selenalatina Apr 07, 2014
Your words are laced very intricately. You put a lot of effort to enable the reader to understand the emotions the character expresses. Well done.
TagPanda TagPanda Aug 21, 2011
this describes heartbreak all too well. i hope she'll feel better soon!
peaceloveapplejuice peaceloveapplejuice Aug 20, 2011
Aw... now i really want to know what happens.  I love how you captured her anger and sadness/ frustration.
DaydreamerXx DaydreamerXx Aug 20, 2011
I love the description, and Iove short stories, so I'm definatley reading on :D x
MayenWrites MayenWrites Aug 07, 2011
@Brokenlessthan3 OMGah just got this! Thank you so much!!! ^___^
Brokenlessthan3 Brokenlessthan3 Aug 01, 2011
JUst by reading the blurb..."man," I thought.."This story is gonna leave me breathless....'
                              I love the way you describe everything and the big effect it leaves on its readers...keep going :))