Everything We Had

Everything We Had

34.1K Reads 1K Votes 11 Part Story
Mayen By MayenWrites Completed

How long does it take a heart to heal? When the damage feels beyond repair, how do you face the days that dawn before you?

selenalatina selenalatina Apr 07, 2014
Your words are laced very intricately. You put a lot of effort to enable the reader to understand the emotions the character expresses. Well done.
TagPanda TagPanda Aug 21, 2011
this describes heartbreak all too well. i hope she'll feel better soon!
peaceloveapplejuice peaceloveapplejuice Aug 20, 2011
Aw... now i really want to know what happens.  I love how you captured her anger and sadness/ frustration.
DaydreamerXx DaydreamerXx Aug 20, 2011
I love the description, and Iove short stories, so I'm definatley reading on :D x
MayenWrites MayenWrites Aug 07, 2011
@Brokenlessthan3 OMGah just got this! Thank you so much!!! ^___^
Brokenlessthan3 Brokenlessthan3 Aug 01, 2011
JUst by reading the blurb..."man," I thought.."This story is gonna leave me breathless....'
                              I love the way you describe everything and the big effect it leaves on its readers...keep going :))