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Esstiiet Oriandus

Esstiiet Oriandus

1.3K Reads 174 Votes 30 Part Story
Karen Payze By Karen_Payze Updated 7 days ago

Guardians. Elemental beings who protect us from the supernaturals. 

It is said the originals were summoned by the Gaia itself, to restore order and balance to the land and were manifestations of the six elements of earth, air, fire, water, wood and metal. 

Eventually, those guardians fell into fireside stories and folklore.

This is the story of the Esstiiet Oriandus, Earth Guardian.
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Carikavanlog Carikavanlog Sep 13, 2015
Exceptionally well written! This is truly brilliant! You have a heap of talent! :)
myca71797 myca71797 Aug 29, 2015
Great read. I particularly fond of how you write since you create a visible world. The narration is nice so keep it up :)
NavenaGuha NavenaGuha Jul 18, 2015
Well written Karen! Loved it and can't  wait to read the second part. This is the beginning  of something  great..xx
Drewscottwriter Drewscottwriter Jul 14, 2015
Beautifully told story Karen and so well written. Im very much looking forward to reading Part-2
jjmorval jjmorval Jul 14, 2015
Cracking start!  Your narrative style is ethereal and mystical which suits the story you are telling, but at the same time your world is utterly believable, and truly absorbing. As miahilbur says below, I am left just wanting to read on, which can only be a good sign!
                              More please... :o)
EliasNLockne EliasNLockne Jul 13, 2015
A very good beginning with tension, story, an unique habitat and everything written with beautiful words. You are a true wordsmith!