His Choice

His Choice

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_CutieChick_ By _CutieChick_ Updated Jan 12

Tyrion Keir, next in line to be an alpha, has always been fascinated by the concept of soulmates. Unable to understand the responsibilities which come along with the life-long commitment, at nineteen, he's eager to meet her.
  
  Until the fateful day their paths cross. And, suddenly, he finds himself in a predicament. Should he accept her and risk losing his pack, or reject her to achieve his rightful title?
  
  Denise Jerold, a social recluse, enrolls at Oak Ridge College to lead an independent life, away from the pressure and expectations of everyone back home. In amid of intense tests, short deadlines, and a hectic job, she doesn't anticipate meeting a very special boy, nor does she anticipate to be rejected by him. Denise's now left to question her own worth and deal with her past, while trying to understand Tyrion.
  
  Love is patience. Love is sacrifice. Love is acceptance. And, they are about to learn it the hard way.

bubba_bree bubba_bree Mar 15, 2016
Wow, love this so far.  You have a very distinct voice, and your story flows very nicely.  The concept is interesting, and your characters seem alive and real.  great job!
siennafreya siennafreya Apr 01, 2016
If Denise knew nothing about the werewolves she wouldn't think like this and would be shocked at the way this guy had treated her like she was an object
siennafreya siennafreya Apr 01, 2016
Okay. If someone treated me like that I'd be bloody confused and run a mile. :)
siennafreya siennafreya Apr 01, 2016
This sentence doesn't sound quite right when you read it through the first time maybe add in "that" before "he's" to make it flow better
KimTracey2 KimTracey2 Jan 10
A perfect pearl tear so what is she please explain she knows about rejections so if not wolf a witch ? Mmmm can not wait to read more