Hating How Much I Love You

Hating How Much I Love You

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Sophie Griffiths By SophieRenee Completed

Love Matthews and Jason Green are worst enemies; at least that is what everybody believes. In reality they have been getting hot and heavy in between the sheets for the past six years with out anyone's knowledge. How have they managed to keep it a secret for so long...Well that is due to the fact that they can not be in the same room together without screaming at each other and this tends to make family functions between their families a tad awkward. When Love's brother and Jason's sister get engaged and their secret is accidentally outed, what will happen and how will their families react. 

This story contains, sex scenes, protective brother's, enemies-turned-lovers, and so much more!!

22,869 words

Miztisay26 Miztisay26 May 17, 2016
Maybe work on punctuation more? There's lots of run on sentences.
99Thoughts 99Thoughts Apr 28, 2015
A tip to help further improve your writing is to not over use exclamation points when they're not needed. Like there was a sentence that ended with one but the it said "he whispered" and an exclamation point is used to tell the reader when someone is yelling or excited or something if that nature.