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Feel [ON HOLD]

Feel [ON HOLD]

833 Reads 22 Votes 3 Part Story
ダイアナ By woodkid Updated Oct 23, 2011

It's about Eliza, a sixteen years old girl who's life might seem perfect, but as it is generally known, appearances are  often misleading. She has a beautiful and intelligent older sister- who's she's jealous of. She has a gorgeous best friend, nice and lovely- who just started dating the guy she had a crush on since fifth grade. She just traveled to her native country alone and spent the perfect vacation there, under the brilliant sun on golden hay fields- and now that she's back home, all she wants is to go back there, to the crystalline lakes and rapid-current rivers. 
A new year at school begins, and with it, she meets a stranger, a boy- a man, that could change her life. She discovers new feelings she knows nothing about- passion, love, desire... And slowly loses the bubble of innocence that had always shielded her from the adult world. Slowly, she discovers it- as terrifying  and fascinating as it is.

20TrulyBlessed06 20TrulyBlessed06 Apr 06, 2011
This is so great! I cant wait for you to upload again!! :-D 
horiryan horiryan Sep 18, 2010
it's interesting with bits of magic&reality, really like it. But can't stop thinking that the stranger is the guy that her annoying sister is talking about :p so pls upload soon 'cause I'm dying to know what will happen :D:D