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The Bet (Book one of The Bet Trilogy) COMPLETED

The Bet (Book one of The Bet Trilogy) COMPLETED

67.4K Reads 2.3K Votes 22 Part Story
Yvelande Senatus By eva13001 Completed

Melody is just a normal sixteen years old girl 

She likes reading, singing, and playing the guitar 

she would rather stay home instead of going to a party 

She tries to avoid boys at all cost; they are nothing but trouble 

She's just trying to make it out of high school and go to college


Rider is just your typical bad boy 

He parties a lot; gets drunk 

He has the perfect life;Perfect house, parents, friends, money and girls

Everybody loves him 

He would never in a million years like a girl like Melody 

So what happens when he makes a bet with his friends


Well I guess you have to read on to find out


Please read it and I promise you that you won't be disappointed

* Might contains sexual contains and some inappropriate words.... I lied... theirs gonna be a lot of bad words. After all this is a bad boy story


NaLuIsLife24 NaLuIsLife24 Feb 29, 2016
Do you need an editor? Because I'd be happy to help with some of the grammatical issues. I don't mean for this to sound rude, this is an honest offer. ^-^
KaylaElizabethD KaylaElizabethD Feb 01, 2016
Well the grammar was much better in this chapter, still quite a few mistakes. I loved the action. It was something different and quite similar to everyday things.
KaylaElizabethD KaylaElizabethD Feb 01, 2016
Okay I'm going to try help. In chapter one your grammar could get some work and it was a bit rushed. Slow things down a bit. Else I like the start, sorta cliché but it's getting there.
BruhItsAlexa BruhItsAlexa Jul 20, 2015
Ouhhh I like this girl!! She just better beat that Telly Tubby up!!