Shattered Appearances ✓

Shattered Appearances ✓

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mayerli By Call_Me_Mango Completed

|Completed 12//30//16| (under construction)
  
  No one stays the same forever. That's a lesson that Zoey Newman knew very well. After being falsely imprisoned for a crime she didn't commit, Zoe comes out a different person. Someone who doesn't believe in happy endings and Prince Charming's. Forced to return to the place where it all started, Zoe must confront her past demons if she wants a chance to move on. 
  
  Thomas Morgan was just a regular brown-haired boy with a hidden smile. Seemingly ordinary,  no one looked past his brooding personality to see that he might just be suffering too. When Thomas and Zoey meet each other by chance, they learn things that could change their lives forever.
  
  With time, it may be possible for them to cure each others sadness. Maybe, just maybe, they'll realize that you don't have to fake happiness to survive. You just have to have the right person. 
  

        
        highest rank- #148 (4/29/16)

I really like that this is hinting that the witch is going to be a boy. Also the last line in this update is honestly so good.
-Saklap- -Saklap- May 10
why am I thinking of Charlie and Casey haha XD
                              btw, nice book <3
DG_and_Reid DG_and_Reid May 09
Ooh! This chapter was interesting. I didn't see any noticeable grammar mistakes. The pace was nice. And I could definitely hear the wonder and pondering in the narrator's voice. Good job!
JohilJohnsonHardy JohilJohnsonHardy Nov 30, 2016
I like the prologue, especially the first two paragraphs, both ideals that are easy to relate to, currently in trying to figure out which I believe in. I'm going to guess "he" is the father? Either way I like the way you introduced this man that made her life miserable, good start
b00ksareapartoflife b00ksareapartoflife Dec 08, 2016
you cant blame others for your pain,even though they may have caused it in the first place its yournresponsibility to make sure that doesnt control your life anymore.
roseofhope roseofhope Feb 04
 #LeyaBC
                              This is very very good!  I liked the ideals you introduced here,  and I could feel Zoey's perspective and suffering and how she became this person she is at this story. Great job :)