J and The Secret

J and The Secret

338 Reads 9 Votes 2 Part Story
baybiepnay By baybiepnay Updated Dec 27, 2009

One of their best friends just passed away and a group of friends are trying to cope. Trying to be strong and hold it together, while one or two of them seem insincere and someone is hiding something. A secret, not meant to be discovered, will put these friends to the test. 

jossy-love256 jossy-love256 Jan 01, 2010
OMG I LOVED THIS CHAPTER SOO MUCH. TESSA IS KIND OF A BEEYOTCH. ANYWAY; KEEP WRITING THIS STORY. AND KEEP WRITING ONE NIGHT. I LOVEEEE YOUR STORIES ;D
jossy-love256 jossy-love256 Dec 30, 2009
OMIGOD THIS IS SOOO SAD AND SOO CUTE. I FEEL LIKE I LOVE JAKE FISHER. SERIOUSLY.
Banana_Rainbow Banana_Rainbow Dec 29, 2009
I love your stories. You are such a good writer. Its all so vivide. 
                              Hope to read more soon.
                              
                              
                              - vampire_goth17
baybiepnay baybiepnay Dec 27, 2009
@snowyflake: thanks for reading the new story! =] super appreciate your feedback! glad you liked it and the mysteriousness of it lol!
                              
                               i tried something new in writing so we shall see what this turns into! 
                              
                              thanks for commenting and voting ( if you did) =]
                              
                              xoxo baybiepnay!
snowyflake snowyflake Dec 25, 2009
Merry Christmas! =]
                              
                              Nicely laid out, and very mysterious.
                              
                              Keep writing!! =D
someone123 someone123 Dec 25, 2009
Whoo! First comment!! Haha :P 
                              
                              I like this one. Mysterious I guess seeing as how we don't exactly know what happened. It was very well written. I like your use of words and the way you structured your paragraphs. 
                              
                              Well done!! Keep writing!
                              
                              Ana
                              
                              P.S. Merry Christmas!!