I die in video game and got reincarnated in different world

I die in video game and got reincarnated in different world

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Author_san By Author_san Updated Feb 02

Young man die in video game and get reincarnated in different world with his previous memory and cheat like skill.

(My first work and english not my main language so there are many grammars error.  Please tell me in comments so I can fix it)

#GrammarAbuse

SeptimusAJames SeptimusAJames Oct 28, 2016
I am not underestimating him either, I am stating a fact that he is weak
AysaWolf AysaWolf Aug 18, 2016
..... You do realize that he previously said "use Kazu" and also he could easily kîll you himself while in the dungeon... Right?
ToumeiNingen ToumeiNingen Dec 31, 2015
Your description left me tentative to read it, but you surprised me. It's actually much better grammar than some of my friends' text speak.
                              
                              I like this quite a bit.
MichaelWhite642 MichaelWhite642 Nov 11, 2015
It would be easier to understand if you added a "be as" in between "not_and_effective"
MichaelWhite642 MichaelWhite642 Nov 11, 2015
If this is not the case then I suggest you clarify this to " A player can equip any type of weapon as long as they check whether or not it is suitable to their char or not"
MichaelWhite642 MichaelWhite642 Nov 11, 2015
As a question, this seems to contradict itself because you're saying that a player can equip any type of weapon on if that weapon itself is suited to the players character which are completely opposite