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Baddie By BadRose12 Updated Mar 06

She always thought she'd be safe. Safe from the O'Hallow's Eve Sacrifice. She was barely 16, two years under the age limit. So she had nothing to worry about, right? 

She was just scared for no reason....or so she thought.
She thrashed as his furry hands latched onto her wrists and lifted her into the air. She kicked and thrashed, the muscles in her wrists tearing and her bones bruising. She didn't care though. She had to get away. To flee this... this....Berserker.

Great story! :D but does he have to be 7 ft tall? as a short person myself, it makes my neck ache just thinking about the height difference. Also, if this story is back in ye olden days you use a lot of modern slang.
Promising story, however, there doesn't seem to be enough details like setting, what period is this taking place? what does her village look like and etc.
XXrogueXlucyXX XXrogueXlucyXX May 29, 2016
I like your writing style, you have great potential if you ever want to pursue a career in writing
Moonbeatx Moonbeatx Aug 09, 2016
Lmao😂😂 I thought they were spiders and was like fùck no fam bye🏃🏃🏃🏃✌️✌