Enduring the Fire

Enduring the Fire

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Chuck Smith has everything he's ever wanted. He's the star QB in 10th grade, and has the entire school eating out of the palms of his hands, including the cheerleaders. He uses them like toys, playing with their hearts and them tossing them to the side when he's done. Yet, they still love him.
Chuckie Smith is the complete opposite of Chuck, which no one can seem to grasp, since they're twins. Though he's the starting, varsity running back (in 10th grade), he doesn't boast about it. After all, he's only been interested in one girl since he was eight years old. He's honest in his opinions and is kind towards others.
Then, their lives are changed forever. When Chuck falls at a football game, the doctors notice something off about him. Tests, tests, and more tests confirm the diagnosis, yet nobody wants to believe it. Their whole lives are turned upside down as Chuck battles to become what he used to be, to get back on top.

Dude I hate those. Or the ones where a sharp pain shoots through it several times. 😖
☹☹☹ I'm a little iffy about chuck and chuckle. I think there should be different first name unless I pretend on is Davis and the other is smith and they are half brothers
Maebird1 Maebird1 Aug 24
I know someone named Chuck and I have a friend who's last name is Smith (not the same guy)
Dude this is bad go see a doctor forget about your pride for a minute !!
I'm sorry, I just get kinda annoyed when there's no punctuation at the end of dialogues!
Guys. He didn't purposely do that so chill. I don't think he was all like "I'm gonna ask so I can mak her cry lolz"