I'm His Fake Girlfriend

I'm His Fake Girlfriend

156K Reads 4.9K Votes 37 Part Story
Ellexia Lim By 1004WithoutWings Completed

"Cornelia, let's make a deal. You will be my fake girlfriend for 3 months. And I will pay you 30 million dollars for your service, how is that?"

"I refuse."

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What if someone offer you to be his fake girlfriend? Handsome, rich, profesional, that's him. Will you refuse?

But.. What if you don't have any choice other than accepting that offer?

Meet Cornelia (20). A very smart but clumsy and feisty. She is poor and unemployed. She has no money and house. Her life is miserable. Why? You will know the reason soon actually. Just one clue from me : the reason is.. it's because of SOMEONE

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Meet Colton (23). Owner of Steward Company. The biggest company in the world. Handsome, rich, professional, all girls fall for him. But behind that, he has a black past.

Because of one accident, these two meet. Because of one deal, these two can be related. They are from the opposite world. Will they able to find a romance between them?

This is a good story so far, even though it does have some grammatical errors. Can't wait to continue reading and see what happens.
NobodyGirl NobodyGirl Nov 22, 2015
Watch your tenses, you keep switching between the two but over all you're doing really really well
writingsomethingmt writingsomethingmt Oct 27, 2015
The start is just great, it's something that isn't normal. Also, it's quite good, the story, how you set it. It just draws me in and you managed to make me a hate a character here.
ScottArroy ScottArroy Oct 22, 2015
The start to the story is good and the basis of the first chapter sound. Gramitically we have lots of words in the wrong tense or words thay don't translate properly. Wattpad has a number of Editors and your story deserves someone to edit it.
onepandella onepandella Oct 04, 2015
So far I like this story.
                              
                              And for someone who doesn't speak English often, the grammar was pretty good.
                              
                              And also, I wanna punch Cornelia's uncle in the face :D
Alzirax Alzirax Oct 04, 2015
As I've already seen people commenting, your grammar isn't bad, but it could be better ;) Other than that, I think it's very good :)