My Nine Guardians

My Nine Guardians

28.6K Reads 1.6K Votes 7 Part Story
PacificLove10 By PacificLove10 Completed

Sang Sorenson is an average girl.  She gets good grades, has a cookie-cutter family, and regularly participates in sports and other activities.  

One day, as she was walking home from school, Sang felt an unusual pull, calling her towards an abandoned warehouse.  As she walked into the warehouse, she felt herself being transported to Creoso, a mystical world where magic is real and females are very rare.  

The nine dragon shifter guardians were made to protect their destined ruler, a person who is supposed to bring light and happiness to the entire world of Creoso.  As Sang gets transported there, the dragons finally feel the pull to find and protect her.   

What happens when they realize she's a female, and a beautiful one at that?  How will they cope with their overprotective instincts as her guardians and protectors?

I think it's terrific!  You're a great writer...can't wait to see what happens
Makes me think of Sora from kh eating a Soreen cake w his son
im_insaneoO im_insaneoO Jan 19
Hey you should make longer stories like this because I love this story but my only problem is that it's short
Nice foreshadowing! But next time try to make it a bit more subtle. I love the story so far, very interesting.
elizabethbellm elizabethbellm Oct 13, 2015
Is that a pronoun problem or did I miss something? Not trying to be rude just wondering
celestemagix celestemagix Jul 21, 2015
Grammar and story = awesome.  No need to separate every sentence with space (paragraph breaks?). Only put space when change of topic.