Flashlight (Pieter Kramer LS)

Flashlight (Pieter Kramer LS)

16.1K Reads 388 Votes 7 Part Story
LaurenBardill By LaurenBardill Completed

Hey y'all! I'm Alexis Mitchell- little sister by 5 seconds of the famous Beca Mitchell who personally saved the Barden Bellas from failure. Since then they've one three titles and just recently Fat Amy showed Mr. President her vagina. How pleasant! Well, I'm off to see my sister at the car show where the were supposed to perform at and now some bad ass group called Das Sound Machine took their spot. 
Ciao!

It may have potientially mature scene- don't know yet!

illanna284 illanna284 Oct 19
I agree it did say corvett earlier but I totally like camero a lot more
CountryGirl16439 CountryGirl16439 Nov 12, 2015
What? I thought she had a corvette.... that's  what it said earlier in the chapter
snowflake2410 snowflake2410 Sep 26, 2015
Yay he kissed her!! It would be nice if you actually put in a full dinner conversation of them getting to know each other and maybe reactions of the Bellas when they find out she went on a date with someone from DSM. But whatever,  It's your story.  :D
snowflake2410 snowflake2410 Sep 26, 2015
Omg I love this story!! I especially love how the oc is completely original,  and not a mary sue! :) It's nice to see a Pieter fanfiction.
stargirl423 stargirl423 Sep 08, 2015
It was really good, especially at the beginning, but when it came to the followers and the messages, I would change it because it doesn't really fit