the abandoned omegas

the abandoned omegas

26.6K Reads 993 Votes 8 Part Story
I'm neutral By hazelhamster Updated Aug 08, 2016

timmy and Tommy are around 17
they were abandoned by there pack at the age cause the alpha wanted her to kill them
but she didn't

    You really should use "..." and/or -... when they speak because it's really difficult to read it like that (my opinion)
    sindydwinger sindydwinger Jan 24, 2016
    Oh my please edit this please!!!!!The grammar and spelling makes it hard to read
                                  ...seems like a good read