the abandoned omegas

the abandoned omegas

30.2K Reads 1K Votes 8 Part Story
I'm neutral By hazelhamster Updated Aug 08, 2016

timmy and Tommy are around 17
they were abandoned by there pack at the age cause the alpha wanted her to kill them
but she didn't

HarumaSerdaigle HarumaSerdaigle Apr 02, 2017
You really should use "..." and/or -... when they speak because it's really difficult to read it like that (my opinion)
sindydwinger sindydwinger Jan 24, 2016
Oh my please edit this please!!!!!The grammar and spelling makes it hard to read
                              ...seems like a good read