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Behind the scars

Behind the scars

16.2K Reads 587 Votes 11 Part Story
TheJokerLoverGirl By TheJokerLoverGirl Completed

This is a story about Jennifer Blue who falls in love with The Joker, a serial killer in Gotham, but her family tries to stop them from being togerher. But Jennifer started to kill innocent people. So she chose her way with the Joker, will she be able to leave normal life anymore, or will she end her life or will she be next to Joker forever. Read and find out, an exiting story!

Little crazy on the periods. It makes the sentences seem very weird reading it out loud it won't flow properly
Wonalou Wonalou Jan 23
I had a dream where the joker went to walmart, nobody knew who he was because walmarts where all the fat women in bikinis go.
Here's an example I've noticed 
                              
                              I was shy. I still am. 
                              
                              Here's a better way it should flow. "I was shy and I still am. It's why I don't have many friends I guess I've just delt with it"
Periods are a good thing but to many makes the sentences choppy and very uneven a cool strategy is read it out loud or have someone read it for you. Listen. See if it flows or what I do print it out and read it I take a pen and fix whatever doesn't sound right