helples

helples

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roxyboxer By roxyboxer Updated Jul 26, 2015

Myloe's pov

It was so cold as I laid there on the snow helpless ,
I could smell my mum but I couldn't see her .
A few winter weeks past it was the day my mum
Would teach me and my 4 brothers and 1 sister 
To hunt , 

my mum had a field mouse for us all
If we did good .everyone had there turn I was left 
I missed the target twice by jumping a few centimetres  Away from it then my mum walked down

and said am I 
Wagging my tail or not?
I said yes but then I heard growling in a blurry vision,
I could see my siblings and my mum growling then, she
ran to the alpha the alpha said leave him in the woods or I'll kill him 

Alpha wayne

Great we have a blind wolf ,
Angela (myloes mum ) better get rid of him 
TOO BAD WE HAVE A SICK WOLF AND KNOW WE HAVE A BLIND WOLF ,
Well he's gone now little runt better of 

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colemana colemana Apr 25
The story seems good.. But your writing (and sorry to say this) isn't that great. Maybe go back and edit your other chapters before writing a new one (if you still are writing this story) or have like someone edit it for you so you could just write .