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Trust Me Not

Trust Me Not

273 Reads 6 Votes 4 Part Story
MonkeyPatatas By Monkeypatatas Updated Oct 02, 2010

Blue McStadler starting a new life again in camarines-hill town escaping from a yesterday horror.
He befriended Sarah Dolores, Benjamin Martin O'oakley and Rainiel Collad whom he think he can trust his life. The Question is Can he?. Can he escape yesterday mystery?. Can he?.

Monkeypatatas Monkeypatatas Oct 02, 2010
Thankz for all your c0mmentz. . HmMnn, yeah, i admit i'm struggling c0nstructing s0me sentences, but i'm trying and stilL learning english. ., = ) 
                              i just want to write a story in english, it's my dream....Hehehe ; )
AliciaS AliciaS Oct 02, 2010
i love it awesome keep on writing hun a little grammatical problem but great story
EyExplod EyExplod Sep 14, 2010
I loved the whole jiovanni bullying blue scene. This has an interesting storyline. I would advise you to get somebody to edit your story..that way it will be much better :)
Monkeypatatas Monkeypatatas Sep 14, 2010
Hello! Hope someone wilL visit and read my story. My very first one. = )