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My Alpha

My Alpha

21K Reads 776 Votes 9 Part Story
CheersHun By CheersHun Updated Mar 24

Rose was a Beautiful girl with a overy smart mouth.  She was stunning but she didn't have many boyfriends because of her attitude and she didn't have a care in the world and she didn't care what people thought of her.  She moved to Canada to go to school abd that's were she meet Raegan.  He was a popular stud and Rose Hated him but when destiny is for these to t o be together what will happen when she finds out her family secret and that Raegan is her mate and he's her Alpha.

I wanty first class to start a 11 but NOOOOO it just HAS to be 8:30 AM😐
So far this story is very well put together I would just like to help you revise it. There are a lot of ands, and so's. Also you aren't supposed to start a sentence with an and. But great book.
ltetrax ltetrax Nov 19, 2016
Not to be rude or mean or anything but please improve your grammar