Percy Jackson (adopted) son of Hades

Percy Jackson (adopted) son of Hades

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AuraDaughterOfHades By AuraDaughterOfHades Updated Nov 08, 2015

Percy was abused by his stepfather Gabe. What if Hades was there to help him along the way? Please read to find out! Thanks in advance!

    You should add quotation marks. It would make it much easier  to read.
    R u trying to write Morse code? Cuz if u r u need / between letters
    Use quotation marks. It's confusing. And start a new paragraph when another person speaks. It helps keep it organized. It makes it easier for the person to read, and helps them to not get confused.
    You put the spaces in the wrong places on some of the codes, just so you know
    VikingDeathMarch VikingDeathMarch Jan 23, 2016
    Great story, you should use quotation marks when they talk thoug, it makes it easier to read.
    GC040203 GC040203 Sep 22, 2015
    Okay please update this and let me edit it please that was killing me because it got confusing that is all