The Way He Loved Me

The Way He Loved Me

5K Reads 70 Votes 20 Part Story
Allie By jasminnancy Updated May 17, 2011

A story about a young girls fight for truth and love.
This is a story for young and old alike with an open heart for the impossible.

  • abandon
  • airplane
  • allie
  • boat
  • box
  • bullies
  • car
  • cars
  • clue
  • crying
  • cute
  • depression
  • dinner
  • drinking
  • eggs
  • fair
  • fairytale
  • friends
  • garage
  • guitar
  • hammer
  • hope
  • jerks
  • kids
  • kiss
  • knifes
  • lanterns
  • laughing
  • life
  • love
  • loved
  • mom
  • mystery
  • paris
  • romance
  • school
  • travel
  • tyler
  • way
  • wreck
chaterboxxx chaterboxxx Dec 26, 2010
Good start! Only you kind of contradict your self a bit especially when you said I knew who it was at the door but your character says she couldn't believe who of was. I think mixed up your thoughts and hers lol.
                              But I will keep reading
                              
gabbyalex gabbyalex Oct 28, 2010
I like your story! Im going to keep reading and see if your going to keep my interest : )) <33