The Way He Loved Me

The Way He Loved Me

5K Reads 70 Votes 20 Part Story
Allie By jasminnancy Updated May 17, 2011

A story about a young girls fight for truth and love.
This is a story for young and old alike with an open heart for the impossible.

chaterboxxx chaterboxxx Dec 26, 2010
Good start! Only you kind of contradict your self a bit especially when you said I knew who it was at the door but your character says she couldn't believe who of was. I think mixed up your thoughts and hers lol.
                              But I will keep reading
                              
gabbyalex gabbyalex Oct 28, 2010
I like your story! Im going to keep reading and see if your going to keep my interest : )) <33