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My Poems

My Poems

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Midnight202 By Midnight202 Completed

Hello! These are my poems I wrote myself and I will continue adding to these, and just to let you know my poems can range from summer and rollercoasters to being alone in your room on a rainy day. I am just doing this to get some feedback on my work so I know how I can improve. To do that I would actually need some comments so please do so. Thanks

JanaMK1 JanaMK1 Apr 08
This is amazing. Its really incredible how you were able to capture the emotions running through people's head and write them down to let people know they are not alone. I can really relate to this poem.
So true, I can honestly 100% relate to this. It's really nice :)
rsahil rsahil Apr 05
This is the thing which i is completely related to me.. N its awesome
Blurry_boy Blurry_boy Apr 17
Hi. I've always had a love for poetry, and these are just incredible. We need more people like you in the world. People who really do understand.
Who ever said humpty was an egg???? I JUST REALIZEDD THAT (this isnt against your art this was just a random thought)
Excellent! Emotional and interesting. However, the rhyme goes like this- "humpty dumpty sat on the wall, Humpty Dumpty had a great fall, all the kings men and all the kings horses COULDN'T put humpty together again" . But other than that, great!!