My Poems

My Poems

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Midnight202 By Midnight202 Completed

Hello! These are my poems I wrote myself and I will continue adding to these, and just to let you know my poems can range from summer and rollercoasters to being alone in your room on a rainy day. I am just doing this to get some feedback on my work so I know how I can improve. To do that I would actually need some comments so please do so. Thanks

JanaMK1 JanaMK1 Apr 08
This is amazing. Its really incredible how you were able to capture the emotions running through people's head and write them down to let people know they are not alone. I can really relate to this poem.
Don't worry SparksOfGold you should see my attempt.
                              
                              He's slipping away from reality he's about to face his mortality,  Drifting into an endless sleep no longer will he have to weep.
                              
                              You did really good. I'd like to read more.
This is truly awe-inspiring! You have done an amazing job on this piece! Though it did get me down, it is a terrific article!
                              
                              ~ Duskie
So true, I can honestly 100% relate to this. It's really nice :)
rsahil rsahil Apr 05
This is the thing which i is completely related to me.. N its awesome
yes that is true what happens in the past can never be changed