My Poems

My Poems

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Midnight202 By Midnight202 Completed

Hello! These are my poems I wrote myself and I will continue adding to these, and just to let you know my poems can range from summer and rollercoasters to being alone in your room on a rainy day. I am just doing this to get some feedback on my work so I know how I can improve. To do that I would actually need some comments so please do so. Thanks

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CreepyCecilia12 CreepyCecilia12 Jul 17, 2017
Don't worry SparksOfGold you should see my attempt.
                              
                              He's slipping away from reality he's about to face his mortality,  Drifting into an endless sleep no longer will he have to weep.
                              
                              You did really good. I'd like to read more.
StarClanSisters StarClanSisters Jun 28, 2017
This is truly awe-inspiring! You have done an amazing job on this piece! Though it did get me down, it is a terrific article!
                              
                              ~ Duskie
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                              Thank you 💕
That_Kind_Nerd That_Kind_Nerd Sep 07, 2017
This is a Super good poem! I relate, and posting this made me feel a little less alone.
Nerdy_serpent Nerdy_serpent Jul 27, 2017
yes that is true what happens in the past can never be changed
ranggitaanggraeni ranggitaanggraeni Dec 08, 2017
hi, would you like to check out my recent book? and maybe would you like to follow and votes please? it'll means a lot, thanks❤