Only time (bwwm)

Only time (bwwm)

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shyone123 By shyone123 Updated Sep 30

Hey everyone this a new story a lot more explicit that the first and I will be writing in two perspective, trying to write so you can see how each character thinks.
Please give me feedbacks, comments are important because I want to know,  how you feel and what you want....  and vote too.

Kristen Pov
I looked at my bed at all my student loan debts, and my up coming tuition of 50 grand for my last year at NYU, becoming a nurse is so expensive, why didnt I go to a regular college that is cheaper. My friend Renee joined me in my room and sat on my bed.
"What is this?" She asked
"The next fifty years of my life."
"Why don't you come with me, see what I do and I can hook you up. " she said.
"No thanks."
"Its not like your waitressing tips will make up for everything. " she said
And she was right being a waitress wasn't getting me very far as we shared an apartment downtown,  and on top of that every friday I volunteer at the food bank, nothing means more than giving back.
"Put on that red d...

walk away gal you did a good thing. You aint a hoe...yeah respected woman herself
K1Paradise K1Paradise Jul 08
I......😟😟😟😶😶😶 um..... Yeah I don't .. Uh idk what to say.
KimmyMay2 KimmyMay2 Jul 12
Most of these book about black woman sucks . The either easy to get single mom ,strip or just f$ck for money can't you make hard to get than some nasty ho God no wonder men can't see us than anything than a good fu&k
KimmyMay2 KimmyMay2 Jul 12
Sh:t I need to edit that comment but the book is good . I just can't stand how must bwwm book shows/display us as easy and no good mi just end a book and I was mad about the way black woman is depicted as nothing than a good lay
favorite_thing favorite_thing Oct 14, 2015
Why all the girls don't even be 5'5 yet but the guy is like the damn green giant