The Gateway

The Gateway

2.2K Reads 71 Votes 6 Part Story
Jake By pepsi334 Updated Apr 02, 2011

This is a taster of my full, 40+ chapter novel "The Gateway". Which will be finished most likely in July 2011

cutestlibra cutestlibra Jan 27, 2010
wow this is actually very good i like the plot and it is different but in a good way you are an amazing writer
leannee-xo leannee-xo Jan 23, 2010
i really like your story, its different. your a good writer, i love the storyline..lol 
                              
                              thanks for reading mine too btw, oh and i appreciate the feedback..:D
pepperpie pepperpie Jan 17, 2010
It's good, and, yes, you do write a lot. I can barely go one paragraph without getting impatient to post. :)
                              
                              -Sky
pepsi334 pepsi334 Dec 23, 2009
i know i write a lot i just can't help it, thanks so much 4 reading  .)
                              
vampiregoddess vampiregoddess Dec 23, 2009
okay Ill start reading you story now and ill tell you what i think of it at the last entry but man you write a lot!!!
pepsi334 pepsi334 Dec 21, 2009
Pls post if you like it, and also if you have any suggestions as to how I could make it better aswell as spelling and grammar errors
                              
                              Many thanks pepsi