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Don't let me fall (Lesbian story)

Don't let me fall (Lesbian story)

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Clara Séguin By becauseimsecretlygay Completed

Olivia is a self-confident ballerina who's always knew who she was and what she wanted. She's a student in one of the best dance academy in the world and one of the most promising dancer of the country. She's happy in her little dance world with her boyfriend and her pointe shoes. Then comes along Alaska, the mysterious girl who doesn't speak much but has a lot to share. Alaska's world is chaotic, surprising, full of new things, adventures and spontaneous moments. Experiencing this whole new world, Olivia is confused and needs to rediscover who she really is, what she really wants and not just listen to what everybody else is saying, even if that means falling down the rabbit hole.

laylay6622 laylay6622 Mar 18
I was just gonna ask does this really happen but @KittenLoner answered my question
So, uh, I really don't see how the chapter title works into the chapter. Who's Rhea? And who's the replacement? The MC (sorry I can't remember her name...)? Alaska?
Yeah, definitely not a fan of the dialogue style. Kinda distracting, if you know what I mean.
Very cool opening scene, but I think it would be better if it was separated into smaller paragraphs. Just personal opinion, though.