The Bad Boy and The Bad Girl

The Bad Boy and The Bad Girl

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Desteny_Tejada_ By Desteny_Tejada_ Updated Sep 03

Victoria Young has an badass attitude. She doesn't care about what anyone thinks about her. For her senior year of High school she starting at a new school. Victoria isn't like the other girls she has a reason why she is the way she is... But when she meets Ash Connors her life would change...

Ash Connors is the bad boy that every girl could dream of.. Ash doesn't care about any girl because he thinks they are all the same. He sleeps with every different girl and treats them like trash..When he meets Victoria everything is different from him.

I think u need to put more detail in this,  and it's like ur documenting every sing thing
there are no coments thse was a great cappter i love it make loger chapter pls
sofia267 sofia267 Jul 12
Minute?My hair takes hours to curl and sometimes it never stays that way
Seems like a really good story line! But there are some spelling and grammar mistakes
I would have interrupted her when she named the character Justin, and I'd be like, this isn't a story it's a memory this actually happend, change it and tell me a different one
I would have changed the moms to lawyer, they get paid more than fashion designers