Surf's Up

Surf's Up

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NikkiWolfe By NikkiWolfe Updated Apr 24, 2014

"I couldn't breath. I tried to climb to the surface of the water but it was all coming down at me so fast. I saw someone dive down to try and save me. They were shouting at me to stay alive. That they couldn't do this again."                           Liam's never set foot in the ocean since the accident. When Avery moves in across the street his world gets turned upside down and around - again and again.  Avery's life is also taking a turn for the worst. Her mother is about to die, she's dealing with epilepsy and has to start all over in someplace new.   Liam teaching Avery how to surf is a miracle all on it's own, but how about if they all have their own secrets, and the drama that goes along with them.  There's only one thing to say,  Surf's Up.

regpeg regpeg Aug 29, 2014
Bear* with me. ;) it's all good. I suck at this stuff! But I'll point out what I do see!
olivebailey13 olivebailey13 Jun 23, 2014
WHAT? Heck no. That chapter was awesome ! Can't wait for more!!!
ReNeExD ReNeExD Jun 10, 2013
@TaylorWaffle You're welcome! And thanks! I've been trying to find a website that I can create good covers on. Lol thanks again and I love your story! :)
NikkiWolfe NikkiWolfe Jun 10, 2013
@ReNeExD Thanks a bunch! And I used Gimp, it's like a free version of photoshop :)
ReNeExD ReNeExD Jun 09, 2013
I really like it so far! Liam's character already intrigues me to continue reading to see why he is so closed off. Also btw I absolutely love the book cover! What did you use to create it? Great job! :)
Isabel0414 Isabel0414 May 08, 2013
This is a really good book and I love surfing so this should be getting Even better than it is