Navei

Navei

517 Reads 31 Votes 18 Part Story
Haven By WilliamHatch Updated Oct 04, 2015

Walter never asked to be born in this generation. He never cared for the birthmark on his arm. He never wanted these destructive talents, nor this body of endless fire and smoke. He didn't want his brother to die.

But he is needed. A dark storm is gathering, and only he can spark the light of hope.

Find him. Bring him to Navei, and help him grow. Prepare him for his destiny. And though he may suffer, it is all for a greater purpose.

  • action
  • birthmark
  • dreams
  • original
  • pg-13
  • superheroes
  • superpowers
CMGrey CMGrey Jul 18, 2015
I enjoyed the action scene really well. It flowed very nicely and was a good surprise seeing this is only the second chapter. 
                              
                              I also enjoyed how Walter detested this ability (because of the death of his brother) he has instead of using it for his benefit as I would have.