Torn (Zayn Malik Fanfiction) *EDITING*

Torn (Zayn Malik Fanfiction) *EDITING*

36 Part Story 27.2K Reads 581 Votes
Mikala By darkvelvet_ Updated Dec 29, 2014

Heather, bullied by 5 guys, yep you've guessed right.

Harry, Louis, Liam, Niall, Zayn.

Pretty cliche story may I add...

Harry is the leader of this group. But he doesn't really hate Heather.

The other boys just float around after him, except, Zayn Malik. He isn't any better then the other four boys but maybe he can be.

Authors Note: I was a carrot when I wrote this, currently editing


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BlueeIsBae BlueeIsBae Apr 20, 2013 12:43AM
This is my 3rd time reading this story and: ts very interesting
maxelis maxelis Apr 06, 2013 02:23AM
@MakkRocker hey Makkrocker it's me PurpleLOVER!! I got a Wattpad ;) could u check out my story u don't long on anymore :(
@MakkRocker This sounds very good! I trust that maybe you will make it more of your own though as the bullying theme can be cliche at times. And your sentences are quite long, I had that problem aswell when I started writing. This is overall very good, keep up the good job. Voted!:)