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Mutations  #wattys2017

Mutations #wattys2017

97.7K Reads 7K Votes 49 Part Story
EmbracingYou By EmbracingYou Updated Jun 15

| C O M P L E T E D |
Subject Six is a genetically advanced human. 

Created in the new world of science, there are only four of her kind. Humans designed to be weapons in the new age, created with similar a DNA structure as animals.

Raised in isolation with no one but her Handler she soon discovers that she is the only female that survived. 

Now she is the only female among three fully grown males, 

And she has to fight for her rank in the pack.

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B_TrIS17 B_TrIS17 Apr 14
O'Hara is my maternal last name (all girls on my moms side has that last name)
Ripper, huh? Nice name. But don't ming me just gonna change that beginning R to a D every time I read it so it'd be funny.
@HenloHeathers omg you're in this story. Why didn't you tell me?
I really like Ripper. The dude is just too awesome  🍃🍃🍃🍃🍃🍃🍃🍃🍃🍃🍃🍃🍃🍃🍃🍃🍃🍃🍃🍃🍃🍃🍃🍃🍃🍃
A good start, but the prologue was very long. I feel like a prologue should be short and hooks you into to the story, and while it definitely hooks you in, it's a bit long.
I am a huge fan of prologue but this one was too long and it didn't spark the interest to read next chapter because it kept going back and forth. I think it should've been straightforward and brought the whole idea in chapter 1 or chapter 2.