The Numbered

The Numbered

4.1M Reads 134K Votes 78 Part Story
MJ Gary By bnlfan Completed

Originally called Flawed.
  Watty 2015 Winner.
  
  Imagine the second you're born, a consultant removes you from your mother's grasp and runs a battery of genetic and physiological tests on you. Thirty minutes later they give you a score out of one hundred which denotes your level of perfection. If your score is above eighty and you work hard to maintain that score you will have a charmed life; well fed, well-rewarded, spoiled. But fall below eighty and you're labelled Sub-80,  and life will not be so kind.  
  
  Hannah is adopted by a Sub-80 family when her birth parents choose their social standing over their daughter and endures a life of struggle, hunger and service.  One day Hannah is escorted to the regional government office and told that the Consultant who delivered her, who labelled her Sub-80 got it wrong!  Now she is being relocated back to her birth parents, to live as one of the Ninety-Five,  all medically and legally judged as perfect. Entering this new life Hannah has an impossible decision to make which puts not only hers, but the lives of everyone she cares about at great risk.
  
  The Numbered-  where no one wants to be number one.
  
  A/N   This story is a first, warts-and-all draft and is being slowly edited.
  
  Thank you for reading.

  • conspiracy
  • dystopia
  • fiction
  • mystery
  • oppression
  • rebellion
  • revenge
  • surveillance
  • teen
  • wattys2015
mk_reads mk_reads Aug 24
Yah dude you are ugly and she is BETTER 
                              
                               #feminist 😂😂😂😂🍟🍟🍟
Not really sure why I decided to reread the prologue but THIS IS SO MUCH WEIRDER WHEN YOU KNOW WHO THAT IS
They r called normal people, the same as u. Have u not gone to school or wut?
mo_ma_ mo_ma_ Dec 09
I ment to read this a while ago, but I kinda left wattpad. So now that I am back I thought I should give it a try... Sounds interesting until now... Let's see....
Chewton Chewton Nov 11
Briggs it is then..... I'm not even sure after reading it completely but that's my best guess....
Story20th Story20th Aug 30
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