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The Numbered

The Numbered

4M Reads 128K Votes 78 Part Story
MJ Gary By bnlfan Completed

Originally called Flawed.
  Watty 2015 Winner.
  Imagine the second you're born, a consultant removes you from your mother's grasp and runs a battery of genetic and physiological tests on you. Thirty minutes later they give you a score out of one hundred which denotes your level of perfection. If your score is above eighty and you work hard to maintain that score you will have a charmed life; well fed, well-rewarded, spoiled. But fall below eighty and you're labelled Sub-80,  and life will not be so kind.  
  Hannah is adopted by a Sub-80 family when her birth parents choose their social standing over their daughter and endures a life of struggle, hunger and service.  One day Hannah is escorted to the regional government office and told that the Consultant who delivered her, who labelled her Sub-80 got it wrong!  Now she is being relocated back to her birth parents, to live as one of the Ninety-Five,  all medically and legally judged as perfect. Entering this new life Hannah has an impossible decision to make which puts not only hers, but the lives of everyone she cares about at great risk.
  The Numbered-  where no one wants to be number one.
  A/N   This story is a first, warts-and-all draft and is being slowly edited.
  Thank you for reading.

krazyk360 krazyk360 Jul 16
That was the lowest mark in my report card and I got in trouble 
                              I just realized I'm relating someone's perfection to my school mark😂😂
doneinsideout doneinsideout 5 days ago
Love how blue paper towels exist even in a dystopian society 😂😂
Just from the beginning, I have a feeling this book is going to be good
TheDoggieQueen TheDoggieQueen 4 days ago
They r called normal people, the same as u. Have u not gone to school or wut?
Me and that consultant would be fighting if that was me. After all that excruciating pain of pushing? Oh I would most definitely be holding my baby.
Amyii55 Amyii55 May 02
gattacaaaaa and that netflix show forgot what it was called, you have points and stuff and that determines who you are.