The Numbered

The Numbered

4.2M Reads 139K Votes 78 Part Story
MJ Gary By bnlfan Completed

Originally called Flawed.
  Watty 2015 Winner.
  
  Imagine the second you're born, a consultant removes you from your mother's grasp and runs a battery of genetic and physiological tests on you. Thirty minutes later they give you a score out of one hundred which denotes your level of perfection. If your score is above eighty and you work hard to maintain that score you will have a charmed life; well fed, well-rewarded, spoiled. But fall below eighty and you're labelled Sub-80,  and life will not be so kind.  
  
  Hannah is adopted by a Sub-80 family when her birth parents choose their social standing over their daughter and endures a life of struggle, hunger and service.  One day Hannah is escorted to the regional government office and told that the Consultant who delivered her, who labelled her Sub-80 got it wrong!  Now she is being relocated back to her birth parents, to live as one of the Ninety-Five,  all medically and legally judged as perfect. Entering this new life Hannah has an impossible decision to make which puts not only hers, but the lives of everyone she cares about at great risk.
  
  The Numbered-  where no one wants to be number one.
  
  A/N   This story is a first, warts-and-all draft and is being slowly edited.
  
  Thank you for reading.

  • conspiracy
  • dystopia
  • fiction
  • mystery
  • oppression
  • rebellion
  • revenge
  • sciencefiction
  • surveillance
  • teen
  • wattpadstars
  • wattys2015
mk_reads mk_reads Aug 24, 2017
Yah dude you are ugly and she is BETTER 
                              
                               #feminist 😂😂😂😂🍟🍟🍟
I usually criticize perfection, but this guy is a real pedophile. And pedophiles should have their own place in hell
Nothing like freezing your face with cold water to start the day 😉
RoadRunner5544 RoadRunner5544 Sep 14, 2017
Not really sure why I decided to reread the prologue but THIS IS SO MUCH WEIRDER WHEN YOU KNOW WHO THAT IS
Those are some very true words! I think most teens and adults are tainted, cause I'm certainly corrupted. Why else would I have a dirty mind and an over active imagination I find both a blessing and a curse