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Percy Jackson, and the elemental Dragon

Percy Jackson, and the elemental Dragon

62K Reads 1.6K Votes 15 Part Story
Omega By Adrianeggs Completed

Percy Jackson savior of Olympus Slayer of Kronos,Gaia etc. is betrayed for his brother Matt not able to take the grief of the betrayal he leaves camp to hear some sort of laughter not able to ignore it he see's the worst thing possible.Percy see's something that makes him snap he see's annabeth and matt kissing while a crowd is cheering them on even percy's dad not able to control the anger he snaps and earthquake so stron it put's poseidon's to shame.....

I counted at least 11 punctuation marks in this chapter... No more than 15.
I thought Zoe Nightshade was the original owner of riptide so how is posiede anything to say about it
iAm_Void iAm_Void Jul 17, 2016
Whaaaaaaat?????????  I don't get it... You might need some work there
PrincessShaye1 PrincessShaye1 Apr 29, 2016
Okay.... But your grammer and function and spelling is terrible. Also you need more paragraphs, sorry but it's really confusing.😕
Jzmorales2334 Jzmorales2334 Apr 02, 2016
There's like no periods or punctuation. 
                              Otherwise... it's okay.
Jzmorales2334 Jzmorales2334 Apr 02, 2016
I can't live under these conditions... Where Percabeth isn't there...