Percy Jackson, and the elemental Dragon

Percy Jackson, and the elemental Dragon

40.5K Reads 1.1K Votes 15 Part Story
Omega By Adrianeggs Completed

Percy Jackson savior of Olympus Slayer of Kronos,Gaia etc. is betrayed for his brother Matt not able to take the grief of the betrayal he leaves camp to hear some sort of laughter not able to ignore it he see's the worst thing possible.Percy see's something that makes him snap he see's annabeth and matt kissing while a crowd is cheering them on even percy's dad not able to control the anger he snaps and earthquake so stron it put's poseidon's to shame.....

iAm_Void iAm_Void Jul 17
Whaaaaaaat?????????  I don't get it... You might need some work there
Okay.... But your grammer and function and spelling is terrible. Also you need more paragraphs, sorry but it's really confusing.😕
There's like no periods or punctuation. 
                              Otherwise... it's okay.
I can't live under these conditions... Where Percabeth isn't there...
Riptiderox Riptiderox May 19
It's good, but some work on the grammar and the flow of the story needs work!
Nex_Ice313 Nex_Ice313 Aug 25, 2015
Riptide isn't Poseidon's sword it was Zoe NightShades only she can say someone is not worthy and take it back