Percy Jackson, and the elemental Dragon

Percy Jackson, and the elemental Dragon

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Omega By Adrianeggs Completed

Percy Jackson savior of Olympus Slayer of Kronos,Gaia etc. is betrayed for his brother Matt not able to take the grief of the betrayal he leaves camp to hear some sort of laughter not able to ignore it he see's the worst thing possible.Percy see's something that makes him snap he see's annabeth and matt kissing while a crowd is cheering them on even percy's dad not able to control the anger he snaps and earthquake so stron it put's poseidon's to shame.....

  • action
  • chaos
  • order
  • pertamis
  • romance
raxon1221 raxon1221 Mar 21
I'll let it go this time because it's your first story but there is only ONE person that can take that sword away
                              ZOE
                              ZOE 
                              ZOE
                              she made the sword with her immortaliy therefore she is the only one that can take it
Goddess_Mysterio Goddess_Mysterio Jun 05, 2017
I counted at least 11 punctuation marks in this chapter... No more than 15.
KING_REAPER KING_REAPER Apr 29, 2017
I thought Zoe Nightshade was the original owner of riptide so how is posiede anything to say about it
EmperorRevan EmperorRevan Aug 24, 2017
This needs a lot of editing. Plus the bio just revealed a whole chapter, and it's the type of thing that EVERYONE does in betrayed story's, while also making Percy oh so strong. I don't know about the others, but I like to see a character struggle in more aspects than just emotion.
iAm_Void iAm_Void Jul 17, 2016
Whaaaaaaat?????????  I don't get it... You might need some work there
Shaye-kspeare Shaye-kspeare Apr 29, 2016
Okay.... But your grammer and function and spelling is terrible. Also you need more paragraphs, sorry but it's really confusing.😕